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Show characters attempting to resolve their pain rather than just stating they are in pain. For example, "she massaged her hurting fingers" is more evocative than "her fingers hurt".

If the "write-up" is intended for healthcare communication, precision is more important than emotion. Struggles & Pains

Pain should not be static; it should evolve in stages (e.g., a wound that first sears, then itches, then tickles). Show characters attempting to resolve their pain rather

If you are writing to someone else experiencing struggles, focus on validation rather than "fixing" the problem. it should evolve in stages (e.g.